The discourse community response had some things that I would like to have changed such as being to

further elaborate on how different yet similar some of the discourse communities were. For example
being at a work or school discourse community would cause for you to communicate in a more formal
way than just talking to them as if you were with friends and or family. With friends and or family you
can communicate through text without having to use proper grammar because you both understand
what each is trying to say to one another. There are examples on the written response itself explaining
how you communicating with family is different than communicating with a colleague. Although I would
have liked to have this elaboration I was pleased that my written response got the main point across to
how each discourse community communicates in different ways it all just depends on what the task is at
hand and with whom you are relaying this message to.