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Insert an alternative prologue, (note, Eva didnt understand the idea.

This could represent a larger


audience so I think I need to explain it a little more)
The idea I of the genocide needs to come across more.
(Fade in) Show a planet, and the enemy ships appearing, then I want to show the drones capturing
some of the locals. And the (fade out) and insert more text.
The three land on the top of the ship.
Shockwave used his power to knock back all the drones on the top of the ship.
The three are now greeted by an enormous door that seems sealed, the rust on the door is visible
and there only seems to be one way in, the three stand and look at the smaller older companion
with them.
Gil stands in front of the door and raises his hand and turns it as his head comes down in
concentration.
The door opens with a dust cloud leaking from the undisturbed wall.
Inside is a huge titan drone!
The titan activates and slams its fist on the deck of the ship, the three jump put the way as it
smashes the floor.

Gil lands behind the titan and goes inside the ship where he sees a huge oval room with a massive
crystal that seems to be powering the monster, and the ship. In front is a withered looking orange
skinned hooded humanoid, with metallic armour plates for limbs, his lips slathering with menace
and a grin as gil enters the room, the door closes.

Back on the deck bastille acrobatically jumps around the titans and lands on its head shockwave
starts to shoot It and jumps onto the arm, the tians is swinging its arms to try and shake them off,
both are firing on it armour body

Inside the room gil and controller are locked in a magic duel and each are connecting their blasts at
one and other, gil is throws the controller down and jumps at him. He is thrown back against the
wall of the ship and shocked.

Back on the deck shockwave and bastille manage to get inside the titan and then lay explosives and
jump out, the titan is blow from the top and lands defeated.
Inside the ships shock from the titan throws the controller off balance, this leaves gil enough time to
push him back into the crystal and then shock him with his own magic, the skeletal figure flashes
from within the hood and body and then with a light explosion, the ship is illuminated with white
light, gil walks out from behind the smoke, him shockwave and bastille stand looking over at the sun
shining through the clouds.. fade out.

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