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Dear ESJ

I have read the paper and find it as a micro-level study it is


publishable. Nonetheless the author is supposed to enrich the paper as
suggested in the text. Also he should: take into consideration the
following comments:
(1) Reduce migration citations of international migration like of West
Africa.
(2) The terms immigration and emigration are only used in international
migration.
(3) The rationale of dividing the four villages to the rest is not clear.
(3) Inter- village migration flow line will tremendously improve the study.
(4) The calculation of percentages in table 1 by villages should be
revisited for Yes and No answers must add to 100 foe each village.

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