The author is supposed to enrich the paper as suggested in the text. He should: Reduce migration citations of international migration like of West Africa. The rationale of dividing the four villages to the rest is not clear. Intervillage migration flow line will tremendously improve the study.
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---04.---comments from reviewer---Juma Ayoub. gwahoma@yahoo.com.docx
The author is supposed to enrich the paper as suggested in the text. He should: Reduce migration citations of international migration like of West Africa. The rationale of dividing the four villages to the rest is not clear. Intervillage migration flow line will tremendously improve the study.
The author is supposed to enrich the paper as suggested in the text. He should: Reduce migration citations of international migration like of West Africa. The rationale of dividing the four villages to the rest is not clear. Intervillage migration flow line will tremendously improve the study.
I have read the paper and find it as a micro-level study it is
publishable. Nonetheless the author is supposed to enrich the paper as suggested in the text. Also he should: take into consideration the following comments: (1) Reduce migration citations of international migration like of West Africa. (2) The terms immigration and emigration are only used in international migration. (3) The rationale of dividing the four villages to the rest is not clear. (3) Inter- village migration flow line will tremendously improve the study. (4) The calculation of percentages in table 1 by villages should be revisited for Yes and No answers must add to 100 foe each village.