From: chelseabhunter@aol.

com
Subject: letter for ENC1101
Date: September 19, 2014 at 2:56:32 PM EDT
To: flyer7504@comcast.net

To Hannah Simon
From Chelsea Hunter

In your first paragraph when you mention Prior, Rose,

and Perl, explain your reason for mentioning them.
For example, say what they had to do with deciding
to do the think aloud protocol. One of your questions
was if it was too long and my response is that if the
information about the authors you talked about wont
benefit your writing process (observation, claim) then
to remove it. I could not identify your conclusion
paragraph, and I could identify your thesis statement
but maybe explain more in detail about it. This paper
had great grammar and research. It sounded
intelligent. The organization was also very good. I
could see the use of the CARS model. The last thing
is the citation but we mentioned that in class.