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Zhane Reynolds [\ Rhetorical Analysis Zo English 11279 a (v — Ms Douglas ‘Smartphones, No Impact on Classroom Learning Smarphones, on of Aner get inventions own to be ble peo may ts tcp as eay ikyi i s computer at inthe pl of your as hag mpt inthe world as ne of he best technologie cretion ever made, Yes musta the smartphone el ithe best invention fall nea te have een the most stort, input and pose eolon inthis of marketing per, tac it ely have oad inp neato fr a eeiting classroom ing? she, Hee eu benef and how they can 2 in classroom leaming. The articles both re fom an apposingWiewpoint ‘database writen in 2013, Boqh of them are stating their opinions on smartphones in base writ 5, Both oF h 3g their opi iho classroom leaming. On¢ bf the agree'that they can benefit classroom learning and the ‘ther doesn't agree. ‘The aricles*Smartphones, Do not benefit classroom Tearing talks about how this issue 5 5 oes not help classroom learning, The article was an issue in the Maclean Canadian r i ‘weekly magazine, inthe issue it explains hour smartphones are a mass distraction, and how it does ot improve gendemic performance because it cannot replace the ability of teacher. The aso) aay tt they oe tras dscns because they eaouge te ee hisstatement thw the cant replace teahers pe nuda ty om 208 in te 7 md sexton jonas romps Ennio) looked at ow laptops have aed jum (Comp oo) 09 dlasroom bavi. The mou we th sa ho ued atop nla pak considerable time multitasking and the laptop they used posed significant distraction to the students, In the researchyhe also abserved the level of laptop use was negatively ‘sat oct eign colon wh he esearch he ten wh pop tad oer than hse wh dd abc et paying tenn a teacher Therefore he aed tha in sowing a expect the same thing from ‘ell phones. The article also talks about how educational technology revolutions have been promise droughou the year from ees 10 video to desktop computers to Upteeincc neil aos lieth chef ng eductlonal experience forthe ets but sales nthe no evidence technology that it can rally ead to higher marks for students, This article was well written and the author used factual and credible sources to help support his viewpoint. ‘The anil “Smanphones wil Bnei lsrom ering actully has more opinionated vow than facta ew like he ther article nhs ates abou how suriphones ran nepal othe ture of ection ad ean, Eventhough there are some people that don't agree with smartphones benefiting classroom learning they can agree with him Saying that smartphones area game changer othe elaseoom, : Le dy i lg th ad ll nce = 2 oe ul omay tite denon angeles set eineniedpoederteata tah wt traditional classroom learning, He compared i to how adults have to bring theirlaptops | pil snd ih hn veer eng ale han the easy ofa Z smartphones are smal and it also complements their size and makes it easier for them to cary it round, Inthe article als state the problems people have with smartphones in classroom learning, the problem isthe perception. The sereens and keyboards on them are to0 small, he also stats that the ther problem with them is tat it causes cheating and Eis 2 points that I can agree with and I feel lke he backed up those points well. From this ticle [still telieve that smartphones do not benefit classroom learning but has some positives to it-The authors ofthis atc supports their viewpoint strongly with opinions Rownat af tne Gocihves You Ke? Add Mu ahcle and doesnot use factual information 10 support their arguments SHH, ures or tu Arthur Vawwe WORKS CITED ‘Smartphones 00 Not Benefit Classroom Learning” Smartphones. Ea, Roman Espejo. Dect CGreenhaven Fess, 2013. Opposing Viewpoints. Fp. rom "Don Give Students More Tools of Mass Distraction Maclean's (28 Sept 2010). Opposing Viewpoints n Context. Web 8 Ser 2014 iN Zane. Reynois Ms, Douglas English 112-79 toms Annotated Bibliography Impact ofthe internet on thnking-CQ Researcher, 2013, Web by Alan Crea > ‘The etcle by Greenbat adresses several ways the internet impacts our thinking. I “Talks about th background of technology and how it was used, He restated a dialogue from Plato (Ptaedrs) complained thatthe written word and books are hampering memory. Instead of remembering things for themselves people had begun tustng writen characters, In overview technology has been making major changes in communication of technology and thought in ancient Greece. Even back then People worried about what the latest technology was doing o their minds, He also used alot of dialogue from book writer Nicholes Carr, he restates fom Cart, thatthe internet makes it harder to remember anything thatthe influx of completing messages interferes withthe physical mechanics of the brain that move information ito longterm memory. Greenblatt also asserted 2008 Aitanie article fe gangle malting us enipid? Care says the intemet is an unmatched tool {oo communications and information but argues that it can have bad effets on our Brains. ww at {1° this atile wont into depth of alt of ways the internet changes the way we think and it hy yh provides a loof different people ftom different aspects in Iles thoughts ancl written ‘work on this subject. It was a very long article so I wasn’t able to use a lot of information from itbut Look from it the best examples and data Min controls isthe internet changing the way we think by; Mattford for CNN Sept 17, 2010.Web “This article talks about how they interviewed Nicholas Carr and his aspects of how the Jmeret can change the way we think. Me fees ike the internet is an information overload, He provided personal situations where he found his brain being ony able to depend on the internet to think. He states" | was only abe to sust ry concentration for ‘a poge or two. My mind would begin to rave stimulation and distraction: it wanted to click on links, jump rom page to page, check emails and do some googling. Baroness Gventield, the oxford university researcher says the ees of too much time infront of a computer as ind change. Car goes ito further detailing of his analysis stating “so as “with cartier inellectal technologies the net strengthens certain funtions but weakens ‘others nthe rile care was aske should we be worried. He responded it depends on hat you value as a human mind, This article gave mea lot of insight of how the intemet effects our mind and information for me to dwell upon from Nicholas Carr the author of Is the internet changing the way The effects ofthe intemet use intensity on quality of life, anxiety and depression scores in pediatric migraine Ebsco host 2014,Web This article is comparing the quality of life, anxiety and depression scores of school children and adolescents with migraines with healthy subject according to thei internet use, The study was performed on 142 children and adolescents aged (9-17 yeas) who ta ben in the pediatric neurology department with headache and migraine problem. “The subjects were divided nto 3 groups of aeconting thei intemet use, Group2= ‘occasional inemet users, proup2 regular internet users and group 3 heavy internet users. ‘The sta al analysis was performed with PASW statistics v 13.0, The results were for the children under 12 years old with migraines were litle signs ofthe internet causing the ‘migraines but forthe adolescent group the scores were much higher. In conclusion the risus ofthe internet in adolescents with migraine led to emotional and physieal impairment permanently. ‘This article wes very informing and provided statistical analysis on this subject It ave clear information ofthe whole analysis and the effet it had on children and adolescents already with mental issues and who use the internet alot to soe if intemet use was causing the problems, I wasa very good ancl, Fear of the internet to young brains unfounded- May 22 Besohost by Hannah Devin, Wels Inthis article it talks about how there is no evidence that moderate internet use has negative effec onthe teenage brain. The latest scientific review challenging arguments ‘made by prominent commenters that teenagers isk permanently damaging thee bran by ‘being on the internet oo much. Kathryn Mills «neuroscientist who led the researc said she found no evidence ofthe ntemetinvalving problem behavior. She states if we want {o know how this highly connected world is impacting our brains we will need to conduct Zhane. Reynolds Mrs, Douglas | 7 ‘ano {* - ‘The internet’, one of the most intriguing programs to operate on Americas most ices esl eer made he ops As wel eves she Noi ‘eb oases dierent ting lke shopping, paying their bil play games, odo academic research and the Best of itll, 1 use thet social mea sites, The internet has hecome peopled al- purpose medium around the woldgp in other words as book writer Nicholas Car woud putt the Conduit for most informat that lows through my eyes eats and into my sind” (Nicholas Cary, fgeton the Zz : Frome and browse through al ips of infomation daily not knowing wha it actully doing ur brink is it negatively infcncng and rearranging te way it works oris ito sit having ro cffet on our sins tall? ha" = als — PL’ or my fis oie I hve chosen Nichols Cas the wer of “What the inte s ing out nto it debs te sry develope of en logy ws invented and then extends ino the mem day technology of computer Carr even inputs his personal experience ofthe interne and how he els itchanged the wy his rain worked nd peated esas and quote, “The way my brn worked seemed io be changing, Kwas hen that I began worrying about my inability to pay attention to one thing for more than a couple computer I yearned to check email, click links do some googling his overall viewpoint in we teookf ar ones ht he ne does not chang ori ees at eve ting Wy stews patent open artistes se cemin bply My secon! wie iby Han Devin the wer of he Eten stale Fer ofimemet Vk young nual aerate a buh 0 an ig that he moderateuse of the internet hafnewaive effets on teenagers In the ails wes ig tot eigath reach om Misawa eckson spell bj. Tha lv \) their relationship to behavior, cognition and wellbeing in a representative sample of the eS My last viee is from Neulie Christine, the author of the Ebscohost article’Changing our rind’ fn her are sei retetngon vir ties ard how the itemet may be changing how people think and behave, She believes thatthe foundation of virtue ethics isthe belie that moral characters formed through habits, in Which she Reeves that he effet ofthe iteret on peoples twins is nota sclentife problem but a moral one, She says “How people choose to use technology to shepe how they think and whether technology will make better people is tele {Im conclsion, the internet does bring lot of different things to the table. It could change the way we think forthe ba or forthe beste but it ean indeed! do something to our brains that «an better the fature depending on how we respond witht Fit had not been forthe intemet our brains wouldn't experience to the intellectual vast mades of thinking that it gives us, The internet does not change the way we think but, we as people can decide if we want i to change the way seins, elke heel qusion noth ere song sin bo whats ‘we going to do withthe information it gives us? Are we going tus it 10 i the ‘way we live oF use it negatively? A thought provoking and intellectually courageous account of how the: &e intemet is changing the way we think now and how the future generations will “us * think Few works could be more important” (Wolf, 1) oy Wag % Works Cited Carr, Nicholas. The shallows, What the Internet Is Doing to Our Brain WW. Norton & company 2011.PRINT. Hannah Devin: Fear of the internet risk to young brains unfounded, Ebscohost article May 22,2014. ~ the Quote is from :Kathrynn Mills, Cee Tinane, Reynolds ‘Mrs. Douglas Lanois Round Table Essiy The intemet, one of the mest intriguing programs to operate on Americas most suecessfl technologies ever made (“the computer”)/As we know everyboxly uses the worldwide ‘web to assess diffrent things like shopping, p ing thei bills, play games, to do academic ‘esearch and the best oft allo use their social media sites, The internet has become peoples all: purpose medium around the world as book writes Nicholas Care would pat i¢the Conduit for ‘most information that flows through my eyes and ears and into my mind” (Nichols Carr, “What the internet is doing 10 our beans” 6).We get on the internet and browse through al types of| information daily not knowing wiat it actually doing to our brains like i it negatively influencing and rearranging the way it works ors ito is it having no effect on our brains at all? pace? eof Salos, : OE or my fis voie Ihave chosen Nicholas Carte writer of Wha the intenets doing to ‘our brains. In thisbook he frst describes the early development of when technalogy was ‘invented and then extends into the modem day technology of eomputers Carr even inputs his personal experience ofthe internet and how he fels it changed the way his brain worked and. operated He saysand | quote, “The way my brain worked seemed to be changing. Iwas then that [began worrying about my inability to pay attention to one thing for more than a couple minutes". He alse states “even when | was away from the computer, | yearned to check email, click links do some googling”. In his overall viewpoint in the hook Carr believes thatthe internet A His own eyane nes... oes not change cur brains he feels that everything changes it but the internet does fragment our ‘bains and believes itis a distraction to people, => My second voces by Hannah Devin, the wer ofthe Ebsco host arse Fea finest isk to ‘young brains unfunded. Inher artile she talks about how there is no evidence in proving that the moderate use of the intemet has no negative effeets on teenagers. Inthe article she uses alot (of Sciemttic esearch from scientists and actual studies on this particular subject, The ncuroscientist she uses who conducted the research states that “if we want to know how highly ‘conned th iret is impacting ou brains we will ned to investigate brain measures and their relationship to behavior, cognition and wellbeing in a representative sample ofthe population’ (Mils, 1). In summary For her viewpoint, Se believes tha it has not yet been enough studies ard especially accurate stuies to prove that the intemet has any effet on young brains My last voiee is fom In conclusion, he inte des bring alto a things to the able ould change the way ment se think or te ha or the star but tan net d somthing oo ins that can better the future depending on how we respond with it. it had not been for the internet our brains woul {SF exerinco toh nll vast nodes of thinking hat gs ws. The inte ces ange aye gern de ait ge think of eh el ue oot wh tints dng tour brain but what ee we song 0 do with te infringes 87 Ate We ging 10 we to poskvely shape he way wwe live or use it negatively? “A thought provoking and intellectually courageous account of how the medium ofthe internet is changing the way we think now andl how the future generations will or will not think. Few works ‘ould be more important”(Wott,1) pot 5 ah Zane. Reynolds Mrs. Douglas nis2014 Round Table Esssy The intemet’, one of the most intriguing programs to operate on Americas most successful technologies ever made (‘the computer") As we know everybody’ ses the worldwide ‘web to assess ferent things like shopping, paying their bills, play games, to do academic research and thebestof ital, to use thir social media sites. The internet has become peoples ll purpose medium around the world or in other words as book waiter Nicholas Carr would putt the Conduit for ros information that ows through my eyes and ears and into my rind" (Nicholas Carr, The Shallows “What the internets doing to our brains”6). We get on the internet and browse through all types of information daily not Knowing what its actually doing t9 our brains like ist negatively infuencing and arranging the way it works ors it ors it having no effect on our rains at all? For my fist voice Thave chasen Nicholas Carr the writer of “What the interet is dang to ur brains’. In his book he Gt deseribes the early development of when technology was invented and thenextends into the modem day technology of computers Carr even inputs his personal experience ofthe interet and how he feel it changed the way hs brain worked and operated He saysand I quote, “The way my brain worked seem tobe changing. It was then that I began worying about my inability o pay attention to one thing for more than a couple sminutes”. He also states some of his own experienoes “even when [was away from the ‘computer, | yeamed to cheek email, click links do some googling”. In his overall viewpoint in the book Carr believes that the internet does not change our beains he feels that everything ‘changes it but the intemet does fragment our brains and believes i isa distraction to people, My second voice is by Hannah Devin, the writer ofthe Ebsco host article Fear of internet risk to young brains unfounded. In er article she talks about how there is no evidence in proving tat the moderate use of the intemet has no negative effects on teenagers. Inthe article she uses a Jot of scientific research ftom scientists and actual stes on this paricular subject. The neuroscientist she uses who conducted the research states that “if we want to know how highly connected the interme is impacting our brains we will ned to investigate brain measures and their relationship o behavior, cognition and wellbeing in a representative sample of the population” (Mill 1). In summary for her viewpoint, she believes that it has not yet been enough studies and especially accurate Studies to prove thatthe intemet has any effect on young brains My last voice is from Neulie Christine, the author ofthe Ebseohestarticle’Changing out rinds' In her article she is reflecting on vite ethics and how the internet may be changing how people think and tehave. She believes thatthe foundation of vite ethics isthe belief tat moral characters formed through habits, in which she believes thatthe effet ofthe internet on peoples brains isnot a scientific problem but a moral one. She says “How people choose to use technology to shape how they think and whether technology will make better people is their In conclusion, the internet docs bring alot of ferent things othe table, It could change the way ve think forthe bad o Zo the beer but it can indeed do something to our brains tha can beter he Future depending on how we respond with itt had not bosn forthe ntemet out tains wouldn't experience tothe intellectual vast modes of thinking that it gives us. The intemet docs not change the way we think bul, We as people can decide if we want it to change the way ‘we think so, el lke the real question isnot what the internet i dong to our brains but wht are ‘we going to do with the information it gives us ? Are we going to seit to positively shape the ‘way we live of use it negatively? “A thought provoking and intellectually courageous account of how the medium of the inteet is changing the way we think now and how the future generations will or will not think. Few works could be more important” (Wolf, 1) Works Cited Carr, Nickola ‘The shallows, What the Internet Is Doing to Our Brains: New York, WW, Norton & company 2011.PRINT. Hannal Devin: Fear ofthe internet risk to young brains unfounded, Ebscohast article May 22,2014,

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