Sex in Advertisement: A

Controversy that Pays Off

by Beatriz Grant

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a reader, and you want to keep your essays directed towards a general audience. Use
addresses such as one, an individual, people, a person, etc. Or, be specif ic: teachers,
conductors, nurses, etc.

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it ref ers to describing the resemblances between things that are not similar, and takes the
preposition "with" when it describes the resemblances between things that are similar.

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Incorrect preposition:
Some words must be used together with certain prepositions in order to create the meaning you
intend. For example, to yell "to" someone is dif f erent f rom yelling "at" someone. Some
conf usion results f rom words such as "compare," which usually takes the preposition "to" when
it ref ers to describing the resemblances between things that are not similar, and takes the
preposition "with" when it describes the resemblances between things that are similar.

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