I need to

1. Introduce all of my sources

2. Be more specific in my ending sentences (transitioning sentences) and possibly explore more
about the subtopic that is discussed in the paragraph before transitioning to another
paragraph/subtopic
3. Order paragraphs/subtopics properly so that enough context is given before talking about the
main topic/problem
4. Specifically discuss HOW the #firstworldproblems is physically a problem and if the trend
makes the First World less aware of issues that are happening in both of the First and Third
World
5. Talk more about how the First World is treating the Third World with the trend floating around
the internet