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Revision Reflection

I changed some sentences in my revised essay. I also added some pictures regarding to
the Weapons of Mass Destructive to my revised site. I added some quotes from my researches to
the revised essay to make it more credible. I added in text citation whenever I paraphrased
information from my researches. I changed some part of the post mortal section, by providing
more information about the book and the relationship between what is happening in the book and
what is happening in the actual world regards to the using of weapons of mass destructive over
innocent people. I tried to have some multimedia regarding to this issue in my site too.

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