Based on the novel you have read, write about a character you feel sorry for.

Support your answer with close reference to the

text.
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Introduction
Synopsis
Answer the
question

The novel that I have learnt is Step By Wicked Step By Anne Fine.
This novel is about .
So based on this story, ..

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The first reason I feel sorry for Colin is because he is forced to be separated from Jack.
1. Who is Jack?
2. How do Jack and Colin
get separated?
3. Is Colin very close to
Jack?

4. What were the activities

that show Jack was close
with Colin when they
were still together?

Clincher

The loves between Colin and Jack is so strong and it is saddened to see Colin is forced to leave Jack without
any explanation from his mother.

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Besides that, I feel sad with Colins story because after the separation, Colin is deeply missing Jack.
1. Does Colin become
happy when they leave
Jack?
2. What does Colin do to
Jacks tobacco tin?
3. Why the tobacco tin is
important to Colin?
4. Does Colin remember
what the nicknames that
Jack used to call him are?
What are the nicknames?

5. Does Colin happy in his

new school?
6. Does Colins mother talk
to him about his problem
in school?

Clincher
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We see how much Colin misses Jack and it is indeed very heartbreaking.

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Lastly, I feel sorry for Colin because he does give up hope of one day he and Jack will be together again.

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1. How long does Colin think

of Jack?
2. What does Colin do to
keep in touch with Jack?
Does he write letter and
does Jack reply?

3. What Colin is going to do if

he has enough money?
4. What does Colin do to
earn some money?

Clincher
Therefore, Colins determination to search for his Dad really touches my heart.
Paragraph 5: Conclusion
Summarize the
whole idea
Relate it to your real
life

In a nutshell, Colins story is indeed the saddest of all.

1. What do you admire about
Colin?
2. What moral value that you
have learnt from Colin?