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AO

Task

Comment

Mark

AO1:
Develop

NadavKanderanalysis.

Researchintoother
photographerswhichinformsthe
developmentofpersonalideas.

Developmentofpersonaltheme.

Breadthofideassupportedby
researchthroughout.

Independentapproach.

Analysisisstrongthroughout.You
demonstrateastrongcontextual
awarenessnotonlyofthevisual
elementsofthepicturebutalso
thewidercontextualcontextthe
imageswerecreatedin.Ifeelthe
themedevelopsfairlywellbutI
thinktheideaneedstoberefined
morewithfurthervisitstodifferent
locations

AO2:
Refine

Contactsheets,selectsandedits
appropriatenessofchoicesmade.

Annotationbareminimum:www,
ebiandwhatsnext.

Experimentationwithideas,
materials,techniquesand
outcome.

Ifeelthatyoudorefineyour
techniquethemixtureofgiffs
photoshop,anddarkroom
techniquereallyworkwell.
Howeveratpresentitfeel
unfinishedthemixofB/Wand
colourisdistractingyouneedto
decideuponanideaanddevelopit
further.
Theannotationthatyouhave
earlieronintheunitisexcellent
butmustbecarriedonthroughout
theproject.

AO3:
Record

FormalElementsunderstanding

FormalElementsapplication
(swimmingpool,coldfallwoods)

Ruleofthirds

Controlofexposureetcwhen
takingaphotograph

Goodunderstandingoftheorybut
thereshouldbeathirdsetof
observationsfocusingontwoof
theelementswithamapofyour
routetaken
whereareyourimagestoillustrate
theruleofthirds?
Youruseofexposureand
technicalskillsaregoodand
demonstrategoodunderstanding
oftechnique.

AO4:
Present

Finalpiece

AverygoodideabutIthinkas
mentionedpreviouslythisidea

Connectionsmadetotheworkof
others.

couldbedevelopedfurtherby
lookingatmoreartistsand
differentlocations.Ihaveputtwo
potentialartiststolookatIthink
yourworkmaydevelopwellinB/W

IdrisKhan

MichealWesely