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VCOP Focus on Punctuation and Connectives

Learning Intentions:
Identify
different
example
s of
punctuat
ion and
connecti
ves
Use examples from the
passage to write your own sentences.
Below is an excerpt from Roald Dahls Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. Read it
carefully. CIRCLE all the punctuation. UNDERLINE the different connectives.

An important room, this! cried Mr Wonka, taking a bunch of keys from

his pocket and slipping one into the keyhole of the door. Mr Wonka
opened the door. Five children and nine grown-ups pushed their ways in and oh, what an amazing sight it was that now met their eyes!
They were looking down upon a lovely valley. There were green meadows
on either side of the valley whilst along the bottom of it, there flowed a
great brown river. What is more, there was a tremendous waterfall
halfway along the river a steep cliff down which the water curled and
rolled in a solid sheet and then went crashing down into a boiling,
churning, whirlpool of froth and spray.
Below the waterfall (and this was the most astonishing sight of all), a
whole mass of enormous glass pipes were dangling down into the river
from somewhere high up in the ceiling! They really were enormous, those
pipes.
Suddenly, the air was filled with screams of excitement. The screams
came from Veruca Salt. She was pointing frantically to the other side of
the river. Look! Look over there! she screamed. What is it? Hes
moving! Hes walking! Its a little person! Its a little man! Down there
below the waterfall!
Everybody stopped picking buttercups and stared across the river.
Shes right, Grandpa! cried Charlie. It is a little man! Can you see
him?
I see him, Charlie! said
Grandpa Joe excitedly then everybody started shouting at once.
Theres two of them!

My gosh, so there is!

Theres more than two! Theres one, two, three, four, five!
How many different examples of punctuation did you find? Use
the space below to write them down along with the correct name.

Choose some examples of punctuation and connectives from the passage. On

the next blank page of your jotter have a go at writing your own sentences.
Use the connectives pyramid to find examples that werent in the passage. Can
you write sentences using them?