What is

Fletch?

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Mitchs Assignment

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Fletch no isnt a giant Panda bear, bat but he likes honey and sarfing surfing. At night he watches and
dreams of starts stars, and in, in d d the day he comes to class. He is good at fisics physics, and maf
math, bat but he talks a lot. he He talks so much, the teacher always gets mad at him. bat Fletch
always listens and but soon forgets, so he gets in trouble again. Fletch is my frend friend, becose
because we both like lemonade.

Commented [hr1]: I suppose you meant but not bat.

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Commented [hr2]: Is this the correct tense Mitch.

Commented [hr3]: I suppose you meant stars.
Commented [hr4]: The tense needs to be the same
throughout your text.
Commented [hr5]: I think this is an unnecessary coma.
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Commented [hr6]: There should always be a capital letter

for the start of a sentence
Commented [hr7]: Same tense throughout.
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Commented [hr8]: Maybe but is a better word here.

Commented [hr9]: Perhaps but is better than and here.
Commented [hr10]: Remember your spelling. The rule I
remember is I before e except after c.

Mitch, can you introduce me to Fletch sometime, he sounds wild.

Make sure you check your spelling and grammar before you complete your
work. It makes it harder for a reader to enjoy your imagination if they have
trouble understanding your words.
I would like to know more about the amazing Fletch. Dont stop writing!

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Commented [hr11]: Mitch, you dont require a comma

required here.
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Commented [hr12]: Remember how you spell because.

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