Antonio Rebolledo

1/29/15
Per.2
A very strange day
I watched the tiny raindrops splatter on the only window in the room as the teacher
droned on and on when suddenly students started being called out of class one by one. I of
course was the last to be called out and even the teacher left before me. I could only think about
what was happening to them. Then it hit me it was flu season but this was no ordinary flu it was
the dog flu. This flu could kill a grown man as fast as a person could blink. I sat there thinking if
I got called out last then that means that I might be the one infected. I started to think a little and
if I had the dog flu then I wouldnt be able to play soccer in high school. After witch I was called
but before I could open the door a man burst through the window and I crumpled up into a ball.
I could only cower in terror as he walked around the classroom and for some reason he
was calling my name I thought that no one was looking for me I looked at him it was my dad but
I thought that he was in Hawaii. So I sprang up like a spring and said here I am and he looked at
me and thought kind and gentle thoughts. He and I started to bond a little but not long because
every one in the school but me and my dad had the dog flu so we had to use the secret exit to
escape once we were out we looked around and was that they werent dying They turned into
zombies. He and I acted like we had the virus but they still didnt catch us. We went home and
my mom and my sister were still there. I was confused I asked what was going on here. My dad
said there was an outbreak of the dog flu and it was mutated.

My parents, my sister, and I all started to head towards the clearance zone. My sister got
sick so we tried our best to save her but our dad had to toss her into a river so that she would be
far away. Then we ran into my cousin and uncle. We were all trying to get to the clearance zone
and we made it. But it turns out that there was no life left for us. We tried our best to continue but
we had failed. Then the army dropped a nuke. That was the end.
Arwyn Lewis- I liked the idea and I though it was cool. What you could work on was maybe
putting more punctuation.
Alex stewart- cool and weird story nothing to improve

Kaleb hella it was very creative and nothing to improve

Ruth: I really liked the story. I would have ensured to use proper punctuation, but it was
incredibly interesting.
Cassidy Wahl- I liked the idea of the story and you are very creative. However you should work
on some punctuation (:
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