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UWRIT 1103 is
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January 21, 2015,
Choose one of the posts written by a member of your group. Examine the descriptions of the two
graphics or three pictures to determine if you, as a group, can think of ways to make the
descriptions even stronger. In doing so, think of your task in this way: if you were going to draw
this graphic, or compose this photograph, how much help would this description be? Rewrite the
description for one of those graphics/photos below:
Rewriting of one of (ay/lif\ Gibson descriptions/photos.
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Then, compose some text(s) that would appear along with this graphic/photo and explain where
that text would appear in (or around) the graphic/photo. (You may use the back of this sheet if
necessary.)
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