Final Portfolio Peer Workshop Talcott

Home Page
Short, sweet and to the point with the introduction. I feel like you could add different pictures in
the home page to fill up some of the empty space. I also think that the color scheme could be
different, but thats just my personal taste.
Letter to Olivia
I didnt understand what you meant when you said especially the procrastination part. Was that
supposed to be its own sentence or was it part of the first sentence? If it was part of the first,
replace the period before with a comma.
Discussion Forum
Not a lot to go on here. I cant figure out how to post the discussion forums, but one thing Id
recommend trying is getting all of the forums into a file and having it like you did with the letter
to Olivia, that way it wont take up too much room.
Journal Entries
Go into a bit more detail when you talk about that last sentence. It isnt very clear about how that
helped you improve later in the semester
Micro-Ethnography
One thing that I would do here is group the material together. What I mean by that is have the
Micro-Ethnography drafts together, the field notes and interview questions together, ect. Make a
timeline to show growth.
Midterm Reflection
For the midterm reflection, go into a little bit of detail about how you think youve improved as a
writer at the middle of the semester compared to the beginning.
Final Reflection
Hasnt been added yet.

Category

Genre Analysis
(20 points)

Micro-Ethnography

Scoring Criteria
Genre Proposal
2 peer workshops
Draft 2
Olivia's comments (either comments or summary)
Revision Workshop
Final Draft (see rubric)
Field Notes & Interview Questions

Total
Points
1
2
1
1
1
14
1

Score

(20 points)

Midterm Reflection
(5 points)
Final Reflection
(15 points)
Daily
Assignments
(5 points)
Overall
Construction
(10 points)
Portfolio
(5 points)

Score

Swales Chart
Outline
2 peer workshops
Draft 2
Olivia's comments (either comments or summary)
Final Draft (see rubric)
PowerPoint Presentation
Final Draft (see rubric)
2 peer workshops
Final Draft (see rubric)
Letter to Olivia
5 Daybook Entries
2 In-Class Assignments
5 Discussion Forum Posts
5 Discussion Forum Replies
2 peer workshops
A short introduction is included for each page, which
includes a detailed description of the items presented.
The portfolio meets the needs of the intended audience.
The portfolio contains a strong personal introduction that
frames the rest of the portfolio.
The writer demonstrates a firm grasp of the conventions
of written English (spelling, capitalization, punctuation
etc.). There are no typos.
Total Points

1
1
2
1
1
11
2
5
1.5
13.5
1
1
1
1
1
1

.5

70