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April1,2015
TheMostFantasticTitleEverWrittenGoesHere
Thisfirstsentenceisforyourhook.Then,thejobofthesecondsentenceistotellyour
readerssomebackgroundaboutyourtopic.Youramazingthesisstatementisthefinal
sentenceintheintroduction.
NoticehowIstarteachparagraphwithanindentation.Yes,IknowIshouldnotbe
narratingtoyou,butthisisasample.DidyounoticethecompoundsentenceIjustthrewin?
WhenIvarymysentences,thereadercanfollowmythoughtswithoutboredom.Youmustbe
countingsentencesbynowtoseeifanewparagraphcanbegin.Beforeyourushtoindent
again,acraftyauthorwouldplaceatransitionsentenceinthisspotfirst.
Moreover,youmighthavenoticedmyfirstbodyparagraphhadprettyrespectable
sentenceorder.Iwastryingtobelogical,theartofbeingordered,soyouwouldunderstand
mypoints.Myfeebleattemptatusinganappositivewasmarginal.However,Iwillmakeupfor
thisinusingwellchosentransitionwords.Again,afinewriterwouldtransitionintothefinal
bodyparagraphhere.
Actually,thisfinalparagraphshouldhavebeenthefirstbecauseessaysareabout
ANSWERINGTHEQUESTION.Irealizeusingcapitalizationinthiswayshouldbereserved
fortextinghowever,Iimploreyoutoheedthecapitals.Theeasiestwaytobeginawriting
responseistoreallythinkaboutandanswerthequestion.Otherwise,allyouramazing
creativeenergyisgoingoffinatangent.Insteadofaconclusion,youwouldberequiredto
writeageometricproof.However,thiswouldletmedemonstratecommasinaseries.For
example,geometrystudentswriteproofsusingkeypoints,tcharts,andparagraphs.Withthis


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inmind,Iwillstopincludingrandomthoughts.Instead,Iwillgetbackontracktofinishthis
essayproperly.
Yet,Ihavetoaddressthemisplacedmodifierinthelastsentence.Theadverb
properlyismodifyingfinish.So,Iamgoingtoretypethatlastfoolishmistake.Finally,Iwill
getbackontracktoproperlyfinishthisessayIwillalsotrytosneakinanothersentence,by
usingthesemicolon,forthoseofyouwhoarecountingto5sentences.
Afterall,thepointofthisessaywastojoyfullyremindyouofessaybasics.Onelasttip
istouseinsertpagenumbersforyournameandpagenumberinthetoprightcorner.
Althoughthistipistrue,theplacementofthesentenceiswrong.Alas,writersshouldnever
putnewinformationintheirconclusions.

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