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Holly Thomas Comments
Holly Thomas Comments
You have chosen a community with which you are familiar and you seem passionate
about it. You lay out the things that make a dancer successful, but you dont delve
into any of them. In its rough form, this seems more like a report than an inquiry.
To work on this you will need some scholarly articles from juried publications that go
deeply into what happens to dancers who succeed and those who dont. I look
forward to learning more about this through your inquiry.