POST CONSTRUCTION RESEARCH

The Bride
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Pace of establishing shots too long.

Shame about their acting! Write up a script.

You should cut the part where the father over-elaborates in the
beginning.

Need to slow down or pause as you change scenes.

You must take more care with the editing the slow pan left to
reveal Sofias - character for example needs to hold the shot
before cutting. And later, on the bridge, there is a fade transition
(2.26-7) which doesnt look very appealing.

You should hold the shots on Sofias face in the kitchen scene, it
connotes more that its about her trauma.

Why not add a little creativity/surrealism by cross-fading into the

dream-like running away shots? You should use longer, slower
running shots

MID LEVEL 3 AT PRESENT 30