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WritingReflection

Date:28October2014

TypeofWriting:PersonalNarrative

ThepartofmywritingthatIammostproudofis:paragraphing,becausethatwasmygoalandIlike
neatness.

Imadethefollowingrevisionstomywriting:spelling,punctuationandparagraphing.

SomethingIlearnedwhilewritingthispieceis:thementalmoviestrategyisprettyusefulbecauseifyou
canimagineyoucanwriteit.

Mygoalformynextpieceofwritingis:puttingmorepunctuationandstopdoingrunalongsentences.

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