Correct the following real business emails

(names have been changed):

Dear Ken
thank you very much for informing us of your
visit.
i would be in osaka to attend the seminar.
this will be over at 4pm
may i see you in osaka around 4 30pm?
best regards mr Honda
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Dear Sarah,
Greeting from Grandco!
Thank you very much for your message regarding
visiting our office.
I am available on Nov 20; however, our office is
open from 11am.
On that day, I have a short appointment from
11am so that would be very helpful if you could
visit me
around 11: 30.
Please let me know your schedule!

Kind regards,
Jenny

HelloMelissa
Howareyou?
PleasevisitusonWednesday19,15:00butIcantsee
you.Karenwillwaitingforyouto
MeetbecauseIhavedayoffeveryWednesday...
Kindregards,
Katie

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DearPeter,
It'sgoodtohearfromyou,yeson4Decisokto
meetbuthowaboutthetimechangetobe11.30.
Afterthatifyou'vtimewewouldinviteyouforthe
lunch.
Lookingforseeyousoon.
BestRegards
Ken
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Hi Greg

Sorry for late reply, I just got in office today.

I cannot meet you from 5 to 7 Dec, coz I need to be out of
Town.
Would Thursday 4 or Monday 8 of Dec 09 be convenience for
you ? At any times on this day.
Sorry for inconvenience.
Best regards,
John