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YenaShellySuh,MavelleVicente,JoanneLazo

Mr.Ocampo
English10H
19DEC12
Utopia
Inouridealutopiansociety,wewouldgivecitizensaperfectmindset,allowingthemtoclearly
distinguishbetweenrightandwrong,haveapositiveoutlookonlife,andliveinacceptance.Whatwe
meanbythisinourmindsisthatwestillneedimperfectionssothatweareabletolearnandgrow.
Withoutit,thingssuchasknowledgeorinterestswouldnotexist.Wedonotneedtotakethingsoutor
putnewthingsintoasocietyinordertomakeitperfect.However,throughalteringthemindsof
society,youwouldbemoreeasilyabletowipeoutsomeofsocietysmanyvariousproblems.The
reasonbehindthisisthatpeopleinthistypeofsocietywouldbemoredependentlyfixtheseproblems
themselveswithoutresortingtoanalloutwar.Ourutopiansocietywouldhaveitsflaws,butbyaltering
themindsofthecitizens,itwouldturnouttobeperfectintheend.
Allowingthepeopleofourutopiansocietytoclearlydistinguishbetweenrightandwrongis
oneofmanypossiblethingsthatcancontributetoaperfectmindset.Whatitmeanstogivethisability
tocitizensisthattheywouldknow,instinctively,thebadfromthegoodandthiswouldbeconnectedto
thedecisionmakingcomponentswithintheirminds.Theywouldbenaturallycompelledtoopposeand
preventevilandtodogoodthings.Intheperfectmindset,peoplewouldalsohaveapositivelook
towardslife.Thisalonewouldremovedepression,suicide,andinsecurities.Peoplewouldbeableto
advancebecausetheirmindsetwouldhavethemworkharderanditwouldkeepthemfromgivingup.
Lastbutnotleast,thepeopleofourutopiansocietywouldliveinacceptance.Therearenocomparisons
oranykindofjudgement,sodegradingthingslikeracismwouldntexist.Otherthingslikebeing
perfectorimperfect,normalorweird,andsmartordumbwouldceasetoexistbecausetheywouldnt

matter.
WithinourUtopianothingistrulyperfect.Itisunorganized,careless,orevenmessy,butthe
factthatnoonewouldcareiswhatmakesittheidealsociety.Noonewouldcaretheywouldjustlivein
acceptance,knowingrightfromwrong,andlookattheworldinapositiveway.Justhavingthat
mindseteliminatesallsortsofcomplicationsandproblemsthatexistinourcurrentsociety.There
wouldareflawsandimperfections,butfromacceptingthat,insteadthereispeaceandharmony.Our
Utopiaisaperfectsocietybecausethereareproblemsandcomplicationsbut,thankstothemindsetthat
isgiventothepeople,thoseimperfectionsonlyhelpthemmoveforward.

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