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The table chart illustrates the proportion of boys in two different/separate age groups who were
interested in 5 various sport activitiesof in the UK in the year 2010.
Overall, football accounted for the largest percentage of sports in both two groups.In addition,
the rate of boys aged from 6 to 11 participating sports was higher than boys aged 12 to 16
(except for swimming).
87% of boys aged 6-11 in the UK, which accounted for the largest part, was for played football
while the figure for boys aged 12-16 was 78%. The proportion of boys playing basketball in the
UK was 35%, whereas the this proportionfigure for boys aged 12-16 was lower, at 25%. In
term of cricket, the figure forrate of the boys aged 6-11 in the UK was slightly higher than that
for of boys aged 12-16their older counterparts, at 45% and 34% respectively.
By contrast, the rate of boys in the UK spending their time for swimming was exactly the
same in both age groups, at 19% each. However, the percentage of rugby for boys aged 6-11 in
the UK taking part in rugby (at 23%) was 2% higher more than that of boys aged 12-16 (at
21%)
Grade
Task
Achievement

5.0

184 words
- Introduction: C paraphrase c cu hi ca bi khng ?
Cha
Ch keywords

- Overview: c nu c 2 c im ni bt ca biu khng ?

Cha nu c
- Body:
+ S liu trong biu c c m t chnh xc ?
C
+ Cc s liu c c so snh y , hp l ?
c s so snh

Cohesion and

6.5

Coherence
Vocabulary

- Thng tin trong bi c c nhm mt cch mch lc ?

Nhm logic, d hiu
Nn dng thm this/the data/the rate tng tnh lin kt v trnh lp
Nn dng thm lin t so snh

5.0

- T kha trong bi c c paraphrase a dng phong ph ?

Cha paraphrase c nhiu
Ch : thay v boys c th vit: participants, they, youngsters who played,
basketball, members of the youngest group and so on.

Grammar

5.5

- C sai ng php ?
Vn sai ng php, ch b ng
Xem li mnh quan h
- Cu trc so snh c c s dng a dng, phong ph ?
Cha dng nhiu cu trc

Overall

5.5