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    This document provides feedback on strengthening an essay. It notes that the essay was well-researched but could have better supported its argument with historical evidence. Going forward, it recommends stating the main idea up front and providing evidence, rather than concluding after presenting facts. The document also suggests focusing on one clear answer to the question, pushing analysis beyond description by exploring the "why", and expanding on how to navigate the future described.

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    This document provides feedback on strengthening an essay. It notes that the essay was well-researched but could have better supported its argument with historical evidence. Going forward, it recommends stating the main idea up front and providing evidence, rather than concluding after presenting facts. The document also suggests focusing on one clear answer to the question, pushing analysis beyond description by exploring the "why", and expanding on how to navigate the future described.

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    Midterm Comments

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    J. Cox
    This document provides feedback on strengthening an essay. It notes that the essay was well-researched but could have better supported its argument with historical evidence. Going forward, it recommends stating the main idea up front and providing evidence, rather than concluding after presenting facts. The document also suggests focusing on one clear answer to the question, pushing analysis beyond description by exploring the "why", and expanding on how to navigate the future described.

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