Professional Documents
Culture Documents
(Note EACH piece you are submitting for your portfolio must have an
accompanying entry slip.)
Heres what I did to complete this piece (Put a check mark or X next to all
that apply):
Brainstorming ________
Rough Draft __X__
Revisions to my first, or subsequent, drafts _________
Responded to teacher or peer editing comments______
Made a new copy with changes from my revision ___X___
Completed a final edit on my piece ___X___
The sentence or phrases I like best are Waiting to be drawn on, I know you
want to be used. /Unfortunately, I have been busy, sneezing into tissues.
The changes I made to this piece during revision are_making the poem less
elongated.________
I made these changes because_I felt that 14 lines were short and
simple.______________________