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    This document provides examples of comparisons and statements that are missing important context or comparisons. For each example, an improved version is suggested that includes necessary context or comparisons. Some key improvements include specifying what is being compared to, using comparative structures like "than" and "than that of", and maintaining parallelism in comparisons. The document aims to help refine writing and avoid faulty comparisons or omissions.

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    不合邏輯及不完整的比較詞造成更多的含糊不清，同時注意不小心漏掉的字。

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    Clarity 06:Double Check for Faulty Comparisons and Omissions (再次檢查錯誤的比較詞及粗心的疏漏)

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    Unit Six :

    Double Check for Faulty


    Comparisons and Omissions


    http://www.chineseowl.idv.tw

    ?

    Our algorithm is more accurate
    with respect to computational time.

    : Our algorithm is more
    accurate than conventional ones
    with respect to computational
    time.

    ?

    The chemistry department
    cooperates with local industry
    more than their department.

    : The chemistry department
    cooperates with local industry
    more than their department does.

    ?

    The novel material is as strong, if
    not stronger than, available ones.

    : The novel material is as
    strong as, if not stronger than,
    available ones.

    ?
    The research department's
    productivity is higher than the
    administrative division.

    : The research
    department's productivity is
    higher than that of the
    administrative division.
    ?

    The two step-procedure assumes
    that the sample standard deviation
    is proportional the sample mean.

    : The two step-procedure
    assumes that the sample
    standard deviation is
    proportional to the sample mean.




    ?
    The novel material described
    herein has a higher withstanding
    temperature.

    : The novel material
    described herein has a higher
    withstanding temperature than
    other materials.
    ?

    The university stresses discipline
    more than the institute.

    :The university stresses
    discipline more than the
    institute does.



    ?

    The peak is as high, if not higher
    than, other ones.

    : The peak is as high as, if
    not higher than, other ones.






    ?

    The form of the fitting function
    should be defined in advance
    adopt the regression method.

    : The form of the fitting
    function should be defined in
    advance to adopt the regression
    method.

    ?

    The trade school's dropout rate is
    lower than the university.

    : The trade school's
    dropout rate is lower than that of
    the university.






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