Unit Eight :

Combine Conciseness and Clarity

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Accurate prediction of the
boundary parameters by
mathematicians is of heavy
emphasis.

: Mathematicians heavily
emphasize accurately predicting
the boundary parameters.

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An outline of how to install the
software program is made in the
following section.

: The following section
outlines how to install the
software program.

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A thorough description of the
environmental impact on the ozone
layer was made by Smith (1985).

: Smith (1985) thoroughly
described the environmental
impact on the ozone layer.

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Contributing factors to
rainforest depletion include
overpopulation.

: Overpopulation
contributes to rainforest
depletion.
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No significant variation between
the two temperatures occurred.

: The two temperatures did
not significantly vary.



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It is impossible to forecast all
potential workplace hazards.


: All potential workplace
hazards can not be forecasted.


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Adjustment of the parameters is
unnecessary by the control
engineer.

: The control engineer
does not need to adjust the
parameters.



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A significant decline in the
investment return occurred.

: The investment return
significantly declined.






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The investigator made the
suggestion that there is a close
relation between the two conditions.


: The investigator
suggested that the two
conditions are closely related.
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There is a necessity for a
compromise on the proposal by
both parties.

: Both parties must
compromise on the proposal.






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