32 / 40: ADEQUATE-word choice may be somewhat simple in the thesis, topic sentences or both. Abstract idea may be mostly clear but not yet sophisticated. 28 / 40-not ADEQUate-too simple in idea development or wording or both.
32 / 40: ADEQUATE-word choice may be somewhat simple in the thesis, topic sentences or both. Abstract idea may be mostly clear but not yet sophisticated. 28 / 40-not ADEQUate-too simple in idea development or wording or both.
32 / 40: ADEQUATE-word choice may be somewhat simple in the thesis, topic sentences or both. Abstract idea may be mostly clear but not yet sophisticated. 28 / 40-not ADEQUate-too simple in idea development or wording or both.
components are present, sophisticated and clear word choice and insightful-EFFECTIVE.
32/40: ADEQUATE wording, structure and idea
development. Word choice may be somewhat simple in the thesis, topic sentences or both. The abstract idea may be mostly clear but not yet sophisticated.
28/40: NOT ADEQUATE-too simple in idea
development or wording or both. Missing crucial information.