Preliminary Research

- She talks about what she can do for the employer. And mentions that
she want to fill the internship which the company is seeking. I think its
also a way to show that what the employers want in her mind.
Address
-Seems she doesnt have this part.
Introduction
-She points out her skills and experience during the education to
introduce herself to the reader and also talks about what she want to
learn from readers organization which means she knows the readers
organization well. At the last paragraph she mentions what she want to
do for the company.
Qualifications
-She mentions that she is good at troubleshooting problems which she
can help employer. Im not sure is there a sentence to connect the
skills she has mentioned in resume.
Closing
-Yes. At the last paragraph she promised that she will do everything she
can do for the employer. This is simple and clear to show her plan of
action.
Prose
-Seems she did very well in this part.
Appearance
-The main part of letter has three paragraph which is a good structure
of the letter. But she doesnt have the address and date on the letter
which means doesnt include all the elements of a business letter.
Ethics
-What should I say for this part. I believe her.
Overall
_This is a good application letter I think. If she put the address part on
that and talk about the preliminary research part clearly, it should be
prefect.