MYP Media & Film

My Silent Movie - Peer Assessment

(Term 1)

Name: Chadi Awadalla

Form: 11BB
Date: 11/10/15

Student
Group:

Criterion A:
Knowledge and
Understanding

Criterion B:
Developing Skills

Criterion C:
Thinking
Creatively

Sarthank
, Abdul,
Tanguy
& Hyun
Jai

I think that they understood

the basic concept of the task
at hand and worked well as a
group. I also clearly
understood the message they
were trying to convey. They
could use another gender in
their shots for the female
characters.

I think that they could

have done much
better if they were
using a camera and a
tripod as shots were
low quality and a bit
shaky at times but
thumbs up for trying to
use props in their
shots and the .
However their script
was completely
different than their
Rough Cut Movie.
-5/8
I really liked the shots
they were using and I
thought that their
props fit really well
with their story as you
could really see a deer,

I think that their

concept was
superb, I
actually thought
that it could
easily be one of
the best ones in
class. Their use
of editing
however,
wasnt the best
of work.

- 5/8
Moazaz,
Komal,
Leena &
Giorgia

I think that they understood

more than basic concept of
the task at hand and worked
very well as a group. I could
understand their Rough Cut
Movie at the beginning, but

Criterion D:
Responding

Total Score
& Grade
Improvemen
t Comment
(Positive)
They didnt really - Use a
stand out of the
Professional
crowd with their
Camera
Rough Cut Movie, - Work on
however they did Pre/Postdo Substantially
Production
well for the First
-Keep up the
Silent Movie they Creativity!
ever produced in
Media & Film.
-22/32
-5/8

-7/8
I liked their use
of diegetic and
non-diegetic
sounds, not to
mention their
props. I felt that

I felt that they

were the group
that stood out as
they really tried
their best in all
stages of

-Work on the
Adaptation
part
-Make sure
your sounds
fade and not

towards the end I got really

lost and confused with the
characters and their overall
story. Again, they could use
another gender in their shots
for the male characters (to
avoid some confusion).
-6/8

king, and Queen. Their

Storyboard was good
but could use a bit more
detail even better if
humans were involved. A
few shots werent that
good (the hair one).

-5/8

their Creativity
was a weak
point as I didnt
really make an
adaptation to
the story.
-5/8
5

production. They
were all equally
involved in their
production and
always
submitted their
work on
deadlines.
6/8

just stop
-Think about
how your
audience will
see it
-Keep up the
good work!
-22/32