Excellence

Total Score: 20
Commentary
Question 1 (a) The candidate has identified a belief of value that is impacting on his choice not to
eat breakfast
Question 1 (b) The candidate has not explained an impact as a result of not eating breakfast.
Question 1 (c) The candidate has explained how elements of well-being are impacted as a result
of not eating breakfast.
Question 1 (d) This paragraph shows an understanding of a personal strategy to overcome the
influence.
Question 1 (e) Two elements of hauora are explained
Question 1 The candidate has described (a) and (d) and explained (c) and (e) resulting in a
A4.
Question 2 (a) An influence to eat breakfast is described
Question 2 (b) The impact to eat breakfast is explained.
Question 2 (c) The social element of well-being is explained. The 'how' and 'why' is explained
Question 2 (d) This strategy is appropriate to overcome the influence
Question 2 (e) The candidate has explained how two elements of well-being are enhanced due to
this strategy. The physical and social elements are explained.
Question 2 The candidate has made clear connections between (a) and (b) and (d) or (e)
resulting in an E8
Question 3 (a) An influence is described
Question 3 (b) An impact is explained
Question 3 (c) All four elements of well-being are explained.
Question 3 (d) The candidate has described an advocacy strategy.
Question 3 (e) The candidate has explained how two elements of well-being are enhanced due to
this strategy.
Question 3 The candidate has made clear connections between (a) and (b) and (d) or (e)
resulting in an E8