Student Name

How do you feel

If we did not conference today,
you are
If you are having concerns so far,
please write one to two areas you
progressing on
list them below. If you are not,
would like us to focus on in our
your screenplay?
write N/A
conferences tomorrow
(Scale of 1-5)
2

R.M.
I.N.
D.C.

4
5

"I don't know how I can incorporate

more pages. I'm not sure if I will finish
in time."
"How to title/slug line properly"
Empty.
"Transitions, Order"
"None I'm a thug"

"Camera angles that I might need to

add"

4
N. S.

"How do I include my camera angel?" Empty.

W.C.

I don't expect to actually have an

"We can discuss how this will be
issue with this but I just dont want to filmed safely because I know you
run out of time and get stuck."
were concerned with that."

3
K. S.
4
T. M.

I don't expect to actually have an

issue with this but I just dont want to
run out of time and get stuck."
Empty.
"The only things I'm concerned about
setting"
"Setting, order, action, expressions"

"I'm afraid I won't get the necessities I

need."
"N/A"

R. C.

4
W.G.

"I have to work on the end its loose

what i have planned"

"N/A"

Z.C.

"N/A"

"N/A"

Take a moment to reflect on your

collaboration today. Write one
sentence explaining the
importance of writers'
collaboration.

Follow Up

"When ever you colloborate you learn

to make more friends."
Conference 11/12/2015
"It went well."
Conference 11/12/2015
"I think it went great!"

Conference 11/12/2015

"To get another perspective."

Conference 11/12/2015
N.S will be working to add in more
elaborate dialogue and visualized
actions. His story has been mapped
out using the diagram I created.

"When you get another persons'

opinion/point of view on something
you have done it can allow you to edit
and adjust what you have done to be
more acceptable and interesting to
others rather than only to youtrself. It
can also just allow people to become
friends and learn how to work
together more positively and
effeciently."
Conference 11/12/2015

Conference 11/11/2015
K.S. mapped out his Screenplay using
a graphic organizer I created for him.
"The importance of collaboration is so This organizer is meant to help him
that you get a second opinion about maintain organization and
your work."
momentum.
"It went great. It showed me how he
saw my story in his perspective."

Conference 11/13/2015

"Collaborating is important. Even if

people are a pain in the a$$. Also! It
does help you build relationships,
patience, and the REAL WORLD!
Maybe look at someone else's
perspective. Maybe it will help you
with writing. So yeah*awkward
silence*

Conference 11/10/2015
R.C. has already met the page
requirement for this week and is
working on her formatting,
specifically. Afterward, she will be
working to bring her story to a climax
and provide a well-rounded resolution.

"It was good i was worried it end up

being some drama story that i didn't
enjoy or like but it was a cool story
that i enjoyed and glad i got positive
feed back on mine"

Conference 11/10/2015
W.G. used the graphic organizer I
created in order to plot his story and
use it when he gets stuck. He is
working on being explicit with his
actions and dialogue.

Did not participate.

Conferences 11/10/2015
Z.C. had five pages of his screenplay
finished, but he needed to restructure
it because it was not in the proper
format. He didn't have a storyline and
had reached what he thought was his
stopping point. I helped him
brainstorm, and he re-wrote his story
map and is moving forward -- adding
scenes