Megan--
+ Great work on assignment one. Your notes were very thorough and easy to
follow.
* You went well above and beyond the guidelines by providing specific
examples in for every definition for each individual episode.
* With your brief summary about the person you chose to interview, | would
like for you to add a bit more; for instance, | would like to know what this
person's perspective added to the observations? How does it inform what
you have observed?
* Definitely add some photos of the significant characters/scenes throughout
the show. While | was reading your observations, | kept picturing some of
these scenes, so having a visual reference would be really useful. You may
consider using the slideshow feature in Wix to add a running selection of
relevant photos; this will add both to your assignment one and the overall
course portfolio.