Claires Portfolio Link: http://hibbertclaire1.wix.

com/public-relations-blo
Ems Feedback:
1. I really like how you made a prezi! It was a really cool addition, and it had the information
broken up into manageable parts. It made the assignment page not as long which was
nice, and along with the pictures you had added it made the page easy to look at overall.
2. I would add a bit of motion to your portfolio, you dont have to have a lot but it would
make it a bit more interesting to look at. The backdrop goes well with your topic and the
pictures make it easy to look at, but if you would add a bit more color I think it would help
to segment off portions. To add motion right click on the object and select animate. If you
hit customize after selecting your motion you can change the motion to fit what you want
for that area.
3. On the homepage there is the about me section, fix the word interests. I like the pictures
you added to this page, but the portion where you have your name has a space under it.
I would either move your name down or add one of your favorite quotes so that it doesnt
look like something is missing. Maybe use a quote from Sherlock that you really like right
there.
4. For the homework and group work responses I would add the whole response, instead
of just having the first page of the response. It makes it harder to read when the
picture/screenshot cuts off in the middle of a sentence. I really like the borders though,
and how they look like their taped to the screen, I think thats super cute!
5. I dont really see a need for the arrows on the response page, but they add a bit of color
which is nice. Is there a way you could do that without the arrows? It makes it look a like
the paragraphs go with the picture below it instead of the picture beside it. Maybe you
could change the colors of the borders and remove the arrows for a little variety on the
screen.
I love your portfolio!! you did a really great job!!
Haleys Feedback:
1. On your first page, there is a symbol that looks like a post near your goals. I am not sure
if this is a slideshow or something that was supposed to be there and didnt show up on
my laptop or if it isnt supposed to be there. If it is a slideshow then I wish I could see it
so I could give beneficial feedback on it but unfortunately I am unable to.
2. I really like the layout you have for your homework responses. It looks very good and
stands out without there being too much going on in the page. It doesnt look cluttered at
all and is very easy to read.
3. Your assignment one page is very well put together. I like how you dont have the
assignment or observations all bunched together. I like that you are able to click on the
observations and it takes you there so there isnt a bunch of reading on that one page.
4. I think your reflection page is at an awkward spot. By the time I got to the reflection I had
already gone through some of the stuff where you said to begin at, like the about me
page. Maybe consider making it a drop down for the home page.
5. Overall I think you did a very good job on your portfolio. It is laid out nicely and isnt
cluttered at all. It is very visually appealing and you have definitely given me ideas for my
portfolio. I would also go over what you have written and check for spelling mistakes, but
other than that great job!