[Student 22] Mock Feedback Paper 1

Aspirational
Target

Final Mark

Percentage

Grade

52 /81

64 %

The first half of marks in any question are the easiest to get with a bit of specific knowledge &
question focus. Highlight any questions where you got less than half marks. Also highlight
sections where you missed your grade.

Medicine/Crime
Q1/5a Source inferences w/
knowledge (7)
Q1/5b Source to test
interpretation (8)
Q2/3/4/6/7/8a Describe (5)
Q2/3/4/6/7/8b Explain (7)
Q2/3/4/6/7/8c How far do you
agree? (11)

Depth Study
6
4
2
6
2

52 %
D

Q9a Source why published (6)

Q9b Source why published (7)
Q9c Source are you surprised (7)
Q10/11a Describe (5)
Q10/11b Explain (7)
Q10/11c How far do you agree?
(11)
Germany Percentage
Germany Grade

3
6
5
2
5
11
74 %
A

Medicine Percentage
Medicine Grade

Source Questions
Q1/5a Source inferences w/
knowledge (7)
Q1/5b Source to test
interpretation (8)
Q9a Source why published (6)
Q9b Source why published (7)
Q9c Source are you surprised (7)

Non-Source Questions
6
4
3
6
5

68 %
B
Source Question Percentage
Source Question Grade

Q2/3/4/6/7/8a Describe (5)

Q2/3/4/6/7/8b Explain (7)
Q2/3/4/6/7/8c How far do you
agree? (11)
Q10/11a Describe (5)
Q10/11b Explain (7)
Q10/11c How far do you agree?
(11)

2
6
2
2
5
11
60 %
C

Non-Source Question
Percentage
Non-Source Question Grade

A*=63; A=58; B=51; C=47; D=39; E=32;

F=28; G=16
Missed/Wrongly Answered Questions = 3
Potential lost marks due to missed questions
=5

Generic things I could do to improve

my grade
eg. Revision, question practice etc.

If you got all the easy marks you missed out

on your grade would be B
If you picked up ONE extra mark on each
question your grade would be A

Specific things to improve my grade

eg. Use 3 paragraphs in explain questions
OR give details from sources to support my
answers.

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