Professional Documents
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Professor Altman
English 113A
Progression 1: Exercise 2
article will make the reader feel more confident in trusting your article and will make you look
like more of a reliable author to your audience.
A third way you can go about to disprove the lies is by being realistic. When you said, the
failure rate for diets is estimated to be between 90 percent and 98 perfect. You could have stated
the multiple reasons why a person can fail their diets. Not only that but you could have been for
factual on the information that you provided instead of using assumed percentages. Being
realistic and factual will provide the reader with the sense of trust in your work and your
information.
Using these methods or advice that I mentioned will greatly increase the amount of readers that
trust your work and will also make you a more credible writer to other publishers and your
audience.
Sincerely,
Cristian Miramontes
cristian.miramontes.285@my.csun.edu