INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM ] \ g | BRITISH IELTS UNIVERSITY of CAMBRIDGE COUNCIL idp AUSTRALIA ESOL Examinations WRITING ANSWER SHEET Candidate Name: ... aes ween teabmnntaeses Candidate Number: Be Centre Nam Date: ..0%....04...24N6.. i Module: ACADEMIC Pf GENERAL TRAINING | Tick as appropriate TASK 1 the fable roaintoing Schematic data on tHe toto aroun of te Forests a Fifteen year period and alSo ik — cacisting ia » Fene_cbifferek Coueteied daar —predictes Figuees for thece_is_a Subitan hd diEFecence in the Laseh covering tase of Breil with He other theee Camatrien Th mat shikiy Featues of My tule ic Hull As Can be seen» Lai foreat had made up wvet_aer half of ( Baail’s Leds oud Chile Cobain aly 20.4 / lands Covered oy Fareat — ra bade the lowest a oh faccat Coerepe The trench eas Coatings bye 0 Slightly decrease ia isle Acabrolia ook Brarile and a maine vise | in_New Zealach and Chile Sone tang the next _Fif teen youre. Inte EXAMINER'S USE ONLY AFARINESH EXAMINER 2 NUMBER: & 28318 CANDIDATE NUMBER: .....cscssssenseesseeenee : EXAMINER 1 NUMBER. .....EEE" Bent step TT ts fore sea the percatgye. oh focat Cmecnse fe the net aa ood Cun. be bSerced tel, focat ia Naw 2enlak and Chile eSheedily pg Ondd 5 tinhoer waabelys the other $09 Curtrieg coill ne S their Prat Cer 4t Stitly . stitly Juntaporcing te infra de Paaciz Hak in appre aria e Stratesice have led 4. a fall nthe Frrcskes af chucked. stained in thy Chet it oo. be Brazil ond Auckeain . aeh other ¢ tey A hae Sueceod be raise Hrsie Firat usiry lens fan. peliciod » SZ oo? (LL EXAMINER'S USE ONLY IELTS-House. EXAMINER 2 t] Jeo] Tin [7 [era = ENG vongs SK 1 u OFFTOPE ewoniseo sucooe [| EXAMINER 1 UNDeRLENGTH need Penatr TASK 1 a) ce ] oe ene orrTone wewoniseo toeat TAOR e Nevtadays » aic trwetliny had boomed in the etd 0d never be foe Alay saith the advantages it Lag baught Abed; hero OS See deanlnneee wakicl hea triggered heated debates. There are a Catrevecty, Sueee rds the wather Tha tally il Si ieee Weegee mecther ee ee ae Eoeoee eee One ty one side there ore peple wh. rein Favours of aie it its air te cet only hae nasclt the cold Sodller, but alse i ea a3 ay other type. 7 -of travelliy Cinen He fewt on tke didances Cutie by aerapla neh »/ toa Guabfiakle te Soy Hak ther fast geusins type of dearel had madden prsible traneti, across the. erred dag tha (eant time » No nutter how Far ood uscccestible the deitination is, peyplebueValle t cm te bo. of its neuer tedadewvorld y for hil ever Heir pac pese ise oo tf ) Gutroat, Hare are _peyte = 9Rpasing te —tawel by Aen lant a et ba — {tty eel ae 1 theie —dhcsagece men — may he Ha _partetigh hororde of Ha kind of trated 5 andy 2quelly important > bein deprived by tu ; beauty ef laobas uibkicl ore WGated in the pothes. beady te al 7% \Weat misoale aa sin deselog quad ha fee —Momach fs car EXAMINER'S USE ONLY AFARI INESH a |ELTS-House om G 28318ths unsaftey —Aic—accideacts one —eaprosted every clay ist Hoe pres A Ther Gacecncd a numberof pesple . Apact Cron aks dongees, Aeavclling by actapp lan. nda _jeeple fe. virbasy the ster pact wof Ha varld located thie pot. __) __ Takin oaths sides inky accom —p it Con bee Come Mode — HO Jereskon of aecuplins hcl haa cleansed He ccd bas iedenidbles benefits Mal only elect ite wake He arid Smoller leuk alan it oases sere Ie ener nd Kinet - _Curtumed te travel Ae viol d- asses maT =a 5 key a LS a \ ere CT i Yak (YX fage (_K e fro —_ : ee U "EXAMINER'S US USE ON ONLY fa AFARINESH Pera 'TS-House sm roar Sener TA Yee 7 [ir |” |oral a aa PENALTY / LI [errrove enone = Sar an ce ouury eee [mT Joo] Jer] Tera] | Ponce [ Yrmom | [iconeAFARINESH IELTS House | Descripon of Mistakes * The writing is GOOD in many aspects, Task 2 |* You need a wider Fange of grammar. You can show good knowledge of grammar using not only Simple seneces, but difereitypes of compler soweaces (wit atic Pronouns iat who, because, where, which, wien, -if-elc.). 1t-may-be-wise to-use_Passive Voice-(but not ‘Over-use), Conditional Seniences, Modals, Comper Object Imersioa, Parca! cosuctins ard Subordinate Clauses Task 2 You wee more paraphrasing You-weed-to-parah Variety of lis isthe key to get a higher band, - score 7 in LR ase" USe-syonyms or oer parts-OF spect you. need."a_sufciet range of vocabulary tw