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Dearreader,

MynameisJeffreyMoscosoandImenrolledinEnglish113Awithprofessor
DylanAltman.FormeEnglishismyleastfavoritesubjectbecausesincemyhighschool
year,Ihavealwaysbeenstrugglingwithwriting.ThankstomyprofessorAltman,he
havehelpedmehowtowriteawelldonethesis,howtosupportmypointofviewand
theworkcitedpage.
WhenIfirstdidmyessay,Iwasexpectingtobereallygreat,butIdidntrealize
thatIwasmissingthesupportingevidence.Mythesisandsupportingevidencewas
greatbut,Ineedittoprovemypoint.Iwouldonlythrowmyquoteandsaythisproves
mypoint.Irealizedthatthiswasnttherightwaytoprovemypoint.Ineeditmore
analysisandhowthequotesupportsmypoint.Then,Ipracticemoreonmywritingskills
andthenIfeltmoreconfidentandimprovedmywritingskills.Mysecondessay,I
improved,butIstillhadgrammermistakesandIwasmissingmyworkcitedpage.My
secondessaywasbetterthanmyfirstessaybecausemyprofessorcheckedmyessay
andgavemeideasandadvices.
MyproblemwasthatIdidntfeltconfidentoragoodwriterbecauseofmyessay
structureandgrammar.NowmyproblemissolveandIhighlyadmitthatIimprovedmy
writingskills.IfeltthatEnglish113Ahelpedmealotonmywritingskills.ImgladlythatI
learnedhowtowriteanoutstandingessay.EverydayImlearningtobecomeabetter
writer.
Sincerely,
JeffreyMoscoso

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