Post-Peer Review Notes (December 2nd)

Ethnography
A. proposal needs more information from the textbook
-incorporate into section on data analysis
1. Workplace culture: (Briony) *chapter 3 in SPTC*
-connect this chapter to information gathered from observation of
meeting
-describe how the culture of the organization affects:
-how writing tasks are delegated among club leaders
-how environment of organization is reflected in the writing
produce
2. Work Flow (Kaylin) *chapter
-connect this to description of how documents are composed with
others
-utilize chart showing how newsletter is produced in collaboration
-describe how this process alters the writing piece
-displays who gets involved and what their job is in getting
involved
B. include more data examples
-include in data section
-graphics from documents pulled, quotes from interviews, more description of
workplace
-more data will further strengthen our later analysis and addressing of
research question