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WP submission:
(a phrase, sentence,
paragraph, idea,
move, punctuation,
piece of evidence,
etc.)
An observation or
question I received
from De Piero or a
classmate:
The change(s) I
made to what I
initially wrote:
(ie, the change[s] I
made to column 1)
Creates parallelism
between the two
sentences while
enhancing the flow of
the paper.
New sentence:
Similar to the men
from different fields,
different writing
genres and disciplines
approach a topic or
issue with different
perspectives and
purpose according to
their own interests
and audiences, while
utilizing different
language and tone
accordingly.
Sentence replaced
with:
While both of the
scholarly sources
write for people of
their own discipline,
neurology and
education, the
unscholarly news
article directs its
information to the
general public.
More specifically
identifies the
audiences of each
source. Makes it
clearer that this
paragraph is about
audiences and how
they affect the moves
and strategies a writer
uses.
Understanding
Genres and Their
Uses
Yawwwwnnn...
Understanding
textual genres is
useful for much more
than just classifying
works into
categories.
Completely reworked
the intro to hook the
reader more
effectively and pose
questions that will be
addressed in the essay.
Andy, get me
interested in reading
this! Brief me on what
the topic/focus is! :)
resume, winning a
persons heart by
writing a romantic
love letter, or getting
into college by
writing an effective
personal statement.
By comparing works
from different sources
within a genre we can
better understand the
genre, and therefore
better understand how
to put the genre to
use.
I need more of a
specific, driving
thesis statement,
Andy. I don't want a
description, I need an
argument. What,
exactly, are you going
to be arguing here?
And what specific
points are you going
to use to make that
case? What about the
conventions within
this genre will you be
emphasizing?
When we compare
works from three
different varied
sources of internet
news blogs, we can
view similarities and
differences to better
identify the genres
conventions,
structure, and
rhetorical devices,
thus allowing us to
utilize the genre for
our own work more
effectively.
Tightens up the
argument and make it
clear what specific
points will be
examined and argued.
Changed to:
Many internet news
blogs are notorious
for having a particular
bias or format. To
make sure we include
varying viewpoints,
we will include
sources known for
being each more leftwing, right-wing, or
middle ground. We
will examine articles
from
Much more
specifically identifies
why each source is
selected and purpose
they serve
Replace second
sentence with:
This could possibly be
a result of the bias
that each blog is
known for. This
source could be
subconsciously
pushing an agenda
that lines up with the
authors political or
social beliefs.
Replaced with:
Similar to the first
piece, the purpose of
the article is also to
inform of a news
event but there is also
a clear background
political agenda the
article seems to be
pushing.
Why?!
Replaces sentence
with:
After performing a
brief rhetorical
analysis of each
source it becomes
easier to compare and
contrast them in order
to identify
conventions.
Paragraph 6
Makes the
information more
digestable to the
reader and doest
overwhelm them.
This helps us
understand the use of
the genre which, as
Dirk stated, is perhaps
the most important
reason for
understanding genre.
Is there a deeper
thought/idea you
could use to connect
your paper to the
course readings?
Replaced with:
With this new
understanding we can
determine exactly
when and how this
genre would be most
effective. Referring
back to Dirks
discussions, learning
the best use for a
genre is perhaps the
most important reason
to understand it in the
first place.