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October 1, 2015
Journal Entry #3
The thesis of the writers paper is solely the topic of concerts and
starts with stating that Concerts have existed since musics
birth however there is no factual information to help the reader
understand when musics birth was, and how concerts are
intertwined with it. One fact that would help to understand that
concerts are important to music is slightly stated by the writer as
helping to promote the artists of today, however that statement is
lacking any definitive or factual information by refraining how
exactly it promotes the artists while also not being the main form
of advertising todays artists since most promotional music in
modern day extends concerts and is done via music streaming or
social media outlets, since many people cannot make time or have
the money to attend concerts.