Patrick Absences 0 Participation Grade 30/30 < Letter to Ms. Ingram v + Syllabus Quiz ¢+ ‘ Post lv + Draftd BE y+ Post 2 v + Bees Fesfck (on Draft 2 EE) v + Draft 1 bibinoges v + Post3 v+ Midterm: Patrick, a good midterm. I’m going to ask you to revise to add quotes to support your points. I marked two places on your hard copy where it seems natural to ingorporate quotes. Quoting will help you work on critical reflection, as itwill force you to examine and explain your thinking and work more deeply. As for multimodality, I do want to ‘emphasize that thinking about modes should help you AD stricture to your writing, Thinking about modes-oaat help you consider your reader and what they need from you, and how you can most efficiently convey that information. For your bibliography, thinking about modes can help you understand your research better—as YOU are your audience for your research, I can see how that might feel a little “looser” for you. If you know the 3 column notes make more sense to you, then by all means, use those."They are, perhaps, easier to plan. But please don’t be afraid to experiment. If grades were due today, you'd have an A. Keep it up! -ST