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Revision Document 1
Revision Document 1
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DePieros Feedback
Every organization or
company requires artifacts
(written materials in this
case) to communicate in an
effective manner. These
artifacts are different
depending on what type of
organization it is, and the
content they choose to put
up.
Effective communication
Reworked introduction to
within an organization or
grasp readers attention more
company and their clientele is effectively.
essential in determining its
success. Nowadays, this is
primarily achieved by
establishing a relevant,
comprehensive and clear set of
documentation that can be
easily understood by all
recipients.
Additional comments
included to tie back the quote
to my argument.
Location of memos
arguments relocated to the
beginning of the essay as
recommended by professor.
Transition revised to ensure
efficient flow of arguments.
a variety of written
communication, namely
emails, memos and invoices,
Unnecessary citation
removed.