Peer Review Question for RIP Essay.

1. She has clearly spent time analyzing audience reception throughout her essay, and her
introduction reveals how her group will lead the audience with using horror traits.
2. Yes, she clearly describes the medium and genre for the project. By using the short
horror film, they are able to display both temptation and betrayal from the characters
body languages and their dialogues.
3. Yes, the group wants their audiences to be instilled with fear and to be fallen under the
genre of horror. She also points out how the displayed horror works and comes to the
audiences.
- Appealing ethos to the audiences with the realistic moments is one of the examples from
her essay.
- Her description about the character, Rachaels flirtatious behavior is an example of
evilness. By this, the audience starts to expect the problematic scene will come out later
in the film.
- She explains how the tense increases by describing Rachaels unfaithful act toward the
guy. Rachaels walking toward him; touching him, and giving an eye contact are the great
description to support how the worries of the audiences receive from the film.
- It will make a stronger argument if you use scholarly texts in your body paragraphs.
- In the introduction, the unfaithful relationship and pre marital sex are brought out as the
significant element especially in adolescence stage.
4. Yes, she describes how the groups intension of using the scenes and acting and shows
how it approaches to the audiences. I am not quite sure whether she needs to write her
argument relate to the element that is addressed in the introduction.
5. She addresses the group situation and describes in detail as well.