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This pursuits reader to relate the love story of wo people with money throughout the essay. ‘Thesis of essay Inthe book named “ The Great Gatsby" money played a superior role getting above the love of Jay and Daisy because Daisy loved money more than Gatsby. ‘Topie sentence 1 Money makes a person powerful and changes their life, After get to get Daisy back he lose his honesty under the mobbing business. to get Daisy back 9 Gatsby after seoing his lavishing life and his popularity ded towards money and rot for Jay's love. «different manner. Gatsby needed money for geting his love Daisy back and Daisy needed money because she loved money mare than Gatsby,