Peer Editing 12/8/15

Katie Calabro editing Chelsea Browns Work

Portfolio Edits:

Change title for project one in the tabs. Its too long and not consistent
with the other tab for project two
I like how you put the documents directly on the page and that they
are easy to view
Make sure to upload the final draft for project one
Make sure to include the call for proposals for project one
Consider adding a photo or some color to the page for project one
I like your use of photos in project twos page. It makes it more visually
appealing
Make sure to upload the final rough and final draft for project two
The final assessment for project two and the end of course (which is
one assessment) needs to be completed. The assessment for project
one is already done

Proposal Two Edits:

Change the revision date to the day that the portfolio is due so that it looks
up to date
You have a certain amount of spaces under your paragraphs in your proposal
plan page, could you put the same amount of spacing under the proposal
plan title so it looks consistent?
Your proposal plan is well throughout, but I would consider rewording the last
paragraph because the one before it says my goal and then to say my
ultimate goal seems redundant. I would just consider rewording it.
Do you get paid?
Who is Tamara Johnson? What is her job? Liz Breitwise is explained, but not
Tamara
Maybe put pictures and create better bios for the people
Table of contents maybe?
Move Project involvement to its own page