Improving Practical Work

For our group to improve after analyzing the film we have decided to take
multiple actions, to achieve the best quality of film. Re-film Emilys shot with
match on action improved, especially the scene where Emily enters the flat
and Charlie is behind her, so that it doesnt look like two separate shots by
one fluid one. In addition weve decided to change the murder of Emily to
make it seem more realistic, by David drowning her in the sink after Emily
sees him in the kitchen chopping food. Along with this Emily laughs within a
scene which makes it seem poor. We will re-film Kims murder scene where
Charlie beats her to death as you can see it being faked and doesnt look
realistic, which makes the quality of it look poor and not to our best level.
As a group wed give our work now a 2(MID)
As a group weve decided to aim for a 3(HIGH)-4(MID)