10-sentence paragraph

1. Topic Sentence that is deep, definitive, and precise

2. Transition #1: locates us and offers one part of the point
3. Embedded quote (A) with commentary
4. Commentary #1: develops the point in the topic sentence and quote (A)
5. Commentary #2: develops the point in the topic sentence and quote (A)
6. Transition #2 that locates us and offers another part of the point
7. Embedded quote (B) with commentary
8. Commentary #3: develops the point in the topic sentence and quote (B)

9. Commentary #4: develops the point in the topic sentence and quote (B)
10. Concluding Sentence that gives the final so what.