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Payton Azhocar

Curmano
Language Arts 6
6 October 2015
POV Paragraph Reflection
I feel that I had very good Concrete Details and Commentary in my POV paragraph, even
though my topic sentence was in a passive voice. I will be really careful not to use passive voice
in the future. I also feel that I embedded quotes more efficiently than previous paragraphs. I
really liked the voice comments, they were very helpful yet kind. The peer grading was a little
difficult because some students edited all three paragraphs and others did not. We were relying
on our peers for more feedback which can be a good thing or a bad thing.

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