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© Introduction and statement of purpose Name wh Elchwedh Statement of purpose Relevance _. ‘The question is investigating a nutrition iniervention Yes = continue grading No 6 points for the assignment _ | The question has not been answered definitively in the ‘Yes_.continue grading textbook or in the EAL. No —6 points for the assignment T Population is specified _ _ Possible points ‘Your score _| T Examples: Men, Children ages 10-14, Obese women, Patients Yes —5 points _ 1 hospitalized after a heart attack, ete, | Somewhat 2points| £5 _ _ on No ~¢ points a ‘Intervention is specified | Possible points Your score ‘Examples. Nuttition Education, Casein-free & lactosc-tree diet, | Yes — 5 points High CHO diet ys. Low CHO ciet, etc. Somewhat - 2 points . ___| No - ¢ points Outcomes are specified _ | Possible points Exariples; lab values, weight, knowledge retention, athletic Yes — 5 points performance | Somewhat — 2 points. L . a No - G points 7 Introduction _ ‘Components 7 Points possible Your score ‘The intreduction is convincing as to the importance of the ‘Yes —5 points question, All parts of the introduction are related to the Somewhat — 2 points 5 question _ No - 0 points ‘Only primary sources are used as references ‘Yes — 5 points Z __ a 2 No -0 points ot ‘Only peer-reviowed literature (studies, position statements, i Yes — 5 points texts, etc) isused as references. j No -0 points a NOTE: There may be cases where you will need to cite a A newspaper or magazine article. If you feel that it is absolutely “ necessary for you to do 30, please get instructor permission first. : Spelling/erammar errors and non-scientific terminology? 1 <3 mistakes = 20 points | 3-5 mistakes = 10 points . __ 25 mistakes = 0 points Tastructor Comments: gies Y es w aed ako! 3 ye Total points (out of 50): 5C ae ? Methods and Article List Snudent rame_ “a Wy ffs fast [Heecien question ; Research question specifies iatervention, population, and outcomes and is investigating a nutrition intervention __ [Possible 1 Yas: contiaue grading [No -0 points for the assignment Search ferns Possible Yaur - _ ot [score ‘Specific search terms are included Ves — points 4 _ _| No -6 points wt {nclusion/Exelusion criteria: Passible ‘Your | _. . score ‘The inchasion/exchision criteria for articles are clearly ‘Yes = 4 points i defined and can be replicated Somewhat ~ 2 points a woe -. _ No =¢ points Articles: Possible ‘Your _ score “The number oP articles that wore Sound under each search | Ves 4 points term is included and can be replicated by the instructor. No = 0p A final list of articles that will be used in the systematic jraes included, along with the critical review form for each. | NOTE: THIS DOES NOT INCLUDE YOUR i BACKGROUND REFERENCES! | Teach article that will be used in the systematic review fits the inclusion’exctusion criteria and answers the research question Yes, ail included — 4 points 1 or more critical review form missing - 1 points List not included — 0 points Yes 5 poinis Only 4 articles ~ 4 points Only 3 articies ~ 3 points Only 2 articles - 2 points Only 1=1 point None of the articles meet this orteria ~ ¢ points 25 mistakes ~ 0 points Spelling, grammar, and scientific writing Possible |Your | score Spelling/grammar errors and non-scientific terminology? | <3mistakes=4 points | 3.5 mistakes = 2 points | & i Instructor Comments: Total points (out of 25}: Research Paper Final Review Evaluation ~ 50 points Author name: (2), Eicher Tile Page Possible ‘Your score Includes title of paper, your name, date, course name, and instructor jor more missing | > -=all present ie: Formal/mechanics Ts Possible ‘Your score 5-8 pages, double spaced typed, Times New Roman 12 font, ‘or more missing Zz margins 2=all present Pages numbered in lower right-hand comer, the title of the paper is or more missing | footer ll present ‘APA ciation forma Possibie ‘Your score ‘All information that is not your original thoughis are ‘0= lor more un- - Citations occur when references change, cited items 3 3= Oun-cited items Citations are listed in APA style ‘O=no, 3=yes. 3 Citation page is in correct format O=no, 3=yes e725 Spelling/Grammar Possible ‘Your score Spelling/grammar errors and non-scientific terminology? 4 present for not making a suggested revision? 8 10 3-5 not done = 6 >S not done = 0 SUBTOTAL FOR THIS SIDE 30. 13.5 Comments: ontok (pv, orgawrek and Howed very, well. A3|sb Paper concent _ _ T Possible [Your score’ ‘Does the paper have an introduction section that Yes=2 a provides adequate background information on the topic | Could be more clesr=1 te L without providing information that is off-topic Ne ino=0_ _ [Does the paper include a clear statement of the | objective? Ves=2 Has statement, but not clew=1 No obj i Vv Does the paper include a methods section that adequately describes the Titerature search in enough otal that it could be replicated? Yes ~5 Has methods, but <50% of the section is unclear = 3 Has methods, but 750% is unclear or would be unable to objective? seplicate=1 en _ No methods =0 ‘Does the body of the paper adequately address the 1 Yes? Somewhat related or goes off topic in more than 1 section=1 Obj not addressed-0 Does the paper flow well? ; esd, | Has 1-3 areas of poor flow=2 Has >3 areas of poor flow=0 Ts the paper organized ina manner that makes sense? [a other words, ne jumping between topics, ele ' Are there things mentioned in the paper but not appropriately described? In other words, are there sections that “leays you hanging"? Yes-1 No=0_ ‘No=2 ‘Yes, 1-3 areas-1 Yes, >3 areas=0 Does the paper have a conclusion section that Yes= summarizes the purpose of the paper and the “take~ Doesn't adequately summarize ZL home” message? and/or cds abrupily=L ! _ _ __ _| No conelusion-O _ ‘is the take-home message supported by the research | Yes 1 | presented in the body ofthe paper? NOTE: The j conclusion could be that there is no clear answer! L “_, _ SUBTOTAL FOR THIS SIDI Nor 20 Totat seo Ad (Sopts) of Reviewer name’ tle Pave _ Possible ‘Your score Tckudes tile oF paper, out ame, date, course name, and sitacter FO =or mare missing [7 | present Format/meckanies Possible ‘Your sore ‘5-8 pages, double spaced typed, Times New Roman 12 font, Vinch ‘@= or more missing margins 2=all present Pages numbeced in lower right-hand comer, the tle ofthe paper is. [ O=1 or more missing | 7 footer 2=all present "APA citation format | Possible Your score. ‘AH information that is not your onginal thoughts are cited Citations oceur when references change. 3 T= lor more un- cited tems: un-cited items Gitauons are appropriately notated as they appear in the paper ‘Deno, 3=yes: ~ [ Citation page is in correct format . Deno, 3=yes Spelling/Grammmar Possible ‘Your score Spelling errors? None =5 [Grammar errors? Uincomplere sentence, subject/verb agreement, { run-on sentence, ete} i Does the paper contain non-scientific terminology such as colloquialismas, slang terms, 2™ person, eic.? This also inchides phrases such as “The paper said...” (papers don’t speak), or “The research was dore on...” |?3 eccurrences=0 L . SUBTOTAL FOR THIS SIDE. 30. Comments:

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