Teacher feedback

The image
is blurred
and
shadowed.
This
makes the
whole
image look
dark and
gloomy. To
improve I
need to
capture a
photograp
h that has
more
lighting

The
masthead
needs to be
exactly
between the
top of the
page and
the image.
By
correcting
the layout
for my
magazine
will look
more
structured
and thought
out. If the
elements of
my
magazine
are lined up

The text all needs to be

on the image and lined
up. The font used for
the cover lines also
needs to differ from the
masthead font. This will
make different elements
of the magazine front

Image is
far to
close to
page
border. I
need to
adjust
my
magazin
e layout
and size
different
aspects
of my
magazin
e more

I need to remember to include page

numbers, magazine identity and
page contributor/s. By doing this I
will be following more formal
conventions of magazines.

Some of the
wording I
used is
informal and
inappropriate
. I need to
make my
wording more
formal and

Spelling. I
need to
read
through my
work and
take more
care to
increase
accuracy
and
eradicate
spelling and

The lighting in the

photographs needs to be
adjusted. More lighting
needs to be added, this will
stop the photographs from
looking so dark and

I need to correct and

line up the two
different photograph
sections so they are
equal. This will make
the double page
spread look more

There are lots of aspects of my article that I

need to improve. Firstly I must make a
precise decision in which style I should write
in such as is it an interview, feature or a
review. Once I have decided I need to
change the wording and style to my desired
article type. I must also improve the
accuracy of my work. I need to ensure
spelling and punctuation is all-correct and
my style of writing is formal and audience

Need to add page

number, magazine
identity and interview
and picture credits.

Conclusion
I have taken all teacher feedback on board and now will start to
work towards creating a more successful magazine. I will change
different elements of my draft magazine and add more elements to
my magazine. Certain aspects of my magazine need improving that
I have found out by peer feedback and teacher feedback. I will now
start to improve my work and post weekly updates.